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Love happened in the
first hours of the morning.
Our white hours.

The old sycamore
was whispering to the wind,
sharing night secrets

like dark oracles
passed down through the mystic words
of a primal song.

The first golden beams
lingered on his face, casting
lights and shadows on

the serene surface,
making him a damaged god
fit to love and kill

in a single kiss.
Black lashes fluttered open
like crazy feathers

grazing my reason
and allowing lust to flow
like a hundred tides.

Love happened in the
first hours of the morning,
when the wind became

white noise as his hands
went along drawing a soft
new tune on my back,

when the promises
of my life became white lies
compared with his Truth.

Love happened in the
first hours of the morning.
Our white hours.
:iconkisotchka:
I kind of tricked my own mind to write this one. So, because I don't want it to be upset, we're going to say this is not a poem (even if it is) but a series of haikus (which it is, after all. You can count).

Some parts are real memories, some others are pure fiction. Let's say I never sared my bed with a damaged god but I do think the wind and the trees share some dark secrets.

I don't like white and barely ever notice it at all.
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:iconlondonrey:
This is incredibly sweet. (:
Great composition!
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~kisotchka Dec 23, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
I'm glad you like it :)
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*AlterEgo1629 Dec 21, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
This is beautiful.
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~kisotchka Dec 22, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you :hug:
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~rookyWriter Dec 21, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
I think this is a very good poem. It looks good to me.
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~kisotchka Dec 22, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you :)
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:iconmenacingsky:
Damn. This is beautiful. =D
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~kisotchka Dec 21, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you :D
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~DamagedHomewrecker Dec 20, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
theres a gentle simplicity to this and for some reason, i just love it so. i think 'damaged god' is when i fell in love hehe
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